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Thoughts about you
Contributed by
stonedraider23
on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 08:27:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Lost in a world of thoughts
Thoughts about you
My mind about to explode
Thoughts about your eye’s
How can you be so true
A smile that brighten’s the day
Legs that I long to feel
Hands so small
The way your hair smells
Thoughts about you
Thoughts coming from all directions
Wondering what you’re doing
My heart is sad
Missing you dearly
Old feelings pressing hard
Thoughts of you hurting me
Bringing me to my knee’s
Her beauty!! How can she be mine?
Thoughts about you
Just driving me mad
Picturing you walking away
All I have now are
Thoughts about you
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2005-01-12 20:27:56]
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Re: Thoughts about you
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by TaintedSoul on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 10:20:21 PM AEST
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Nothing can compare to the high we feel when in love. Expressed beautifully.
peace
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Re: Thoughts about you
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 01:59:31 AM AEST
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That was just beautiful, a very creative wonderful write. I love it.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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Re: Thoughts about you
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by LanieBug on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 02:50:13 AM AEST
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| im feeling this poem. only it would be a he instead of her and big hands, lol!! |
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