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Please Hold me, Please Kiss Me
Contributed by
bobotheclown
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Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 08:23:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Please hold me
Until I am complete
Please hold me
And teach me what it's like to love and be loved
Please hold me
So I can just look into your eyes
Please hold me
Until my tears of sadness turn into tears of love
Please kiss me
Until all my dreams are of you
Please kiss me
Until I am saturated with your presence
Please kiss me
To make up for the years we lost
Please kiss me
And make me feel alive
Please give me a chance
Because together we cannot be broken
Together we are complete
And, without you, I am simply incomplete
Together we are strong
Together we can smile
And forget our hurt and our mistakes
And, together, we can change this world
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Re: Please Hold me, Please Kiss Me
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by waos on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 08:31:55 PM AEST
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That is so sweet. It's really different from the things you usually write, and it really shows a different part of you to me. It's simple in words, but ... yeah, it's not in any other way. It's sweet. And I think that whoever ends up with you, is going to be one mighty lucky girl.
*clicks tongue and points at you* You're quite a catch there Joel.
:) lol, yeah I'm weird. Nice write, I really liked it.
~waos/Kara |
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Re: Please Hold me, Please Kiss Me
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by Stonedraider23 on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 08:32:57 PM AEST
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| good write memories drive ya crazy sumtimes wanting what u once had or could've had er whateva |
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Re: Please Hold me, Please Kiss Me
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 02:01:00 AM AEST
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Joel, this is just beautiful beyond words. I agree this is so different from your ususal writes and im so inlove with this poem. Great poem as always and believe me when a girl reads this she wont let you go.
Hugs always,
Janey x |
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Re: Please Hold me, Please Kiss Me
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by pixie on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 05:27:45 AM AEST
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awww Joel I loved that, really sweet and tender, you really opened your heart like a flower in this write
pix xx |
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Re: Please Hold me, Please Kiss Me
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by Deathly_Rose on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 11:03:05 AM AEST
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wow Joel this was very touching...
very different from your other pomes, but still just as great....
Whoever this poem was "about" is a very lucky girl...
keep up the great poems :)
*~Alicia~* |
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Re: Please Hold me, Please Kiss Me
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by autumngreeneyes on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 11:26:04 AM AEST
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| A dreamer, aren't you? how wonderful.. |
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Re: Please Hold me, Please Kiss Me
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 07:57:28 AM AEST
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Any girl who let you go after this poem would simply be making a huge mistake. This is one absolutely beautiful poem, and she's a very lucky girl to have it written for her. You have amazing talent, Joel.
- Stacey |
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Re: Please Hold me, Please Kiss Me
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by Avarice_Riot on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 09:47:39 PM AEST
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| Beautiful poem...nice to see a different side to your writing, although it's miles apart from what you usually write, it's no less captivating. |
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Re: Please Hold me, Please Kiss Me
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by yellow_sundragon on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 11:34:10 PM AEST
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Joel, this is beautiful! I hope that you showed her.... I'm sure she would have been so touched by it!
Jaime |
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Re: Please Hold me, Please Kiss Me
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by afraid_of_fear on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 06:41:47 PM AEST
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joel, this is so, so beautiful.. it hurts to read this because it's so full of emotion.. wonderful write, as always..
char xxx |
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Re: Please Hold me, Please Kiss Me
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by Bleeding_Nightmares on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 12:06:10 AM AEST
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| You know hwat you want, and what words to express such raw emtions, excellent poem. |
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