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The Dreams Will Live Forever
Contributed by
sir_odd87
on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 08:12:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I hold her warm body to mine.
Tightly, so she can't leave again.
I kiss her ear, and smell her hair,
Her perfume filling my nostrils.
I gaze into her beautiful eyes,
And tell her that I love her.
She smiles sleepily and happily,
Holding up two fingers.
I get a chill on my back,
And hold her closer,
Tightening the blankets
To keep us warm.
I press closer to her,
And stare again into her eyes.
My lips grow closer to hers,
How I have longed to taste her mouth again.
I open my eyes,
And stare at the dent in her pillow.
I savor her perfume
As it lingers in my nostrils.
I pick up the paper
That I've read all too many times.
And denying the truth,
Open to the obituaries.
My eyes grow damp
As I read her name again.
I know the dreams will never stop,
But I don't think I want them to.
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sir_odd87
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2005-01-12 20:12:23]
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Re: The Dreams Will Live Forever
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by afterdark on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 08:16:05 PM AEST
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| Spell check spell check..You know the only thing this poem does to me is make me feel better that I'm not some goofy faced geek still in High School |
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Re: The Dreams Will Live Forever
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 05:38:07 AM AEST
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| Now I'm going to cry. This is a very real poem, as opposed to mine.... A wonderful write, a few minor spelling errors, but it doesn't hurt the meaning of the poem, in the least |
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Re: The Dreams Will Live Forever
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 03:27:12 PM AEST
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| Nice write. I liked it. |
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Re: The Dreams Will Live Forever
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by psychofemale on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 01:25:07 AM AEST
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| beautiful poem. |
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