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Turtles (Those evil creatures)
Contributed by
nicolettea
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Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 08:01:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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A turtle is a violent creature,
I've seen them bite hogs and even a preacher.
They dance around with enticing charm,
But if you get too close they'll eat your arm.
I once tried to keep one as a pet.
It swam in its puddle and got really wet...
I wanted to hug it... but I got too near.
It bit off my... fingers and then got my ear.
It then escaped into the vast woods;
And from there it took over small neighborhoods.
I tried to follow it, but never could tell
Where that turtle hid (was it in its shell?)
I cried and I cried, and I cry still.
I made it a monument on my favorite hill...
It looks like a turtle, but it can't replace
My vallient creature's beautiful face!
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nicolettea
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Re: Turtles (Those evil creatures)
(User Rating: 1 ) by LevyMetal on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 08:03:02 PM AEST (User
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aw what a cute poem. lol it was very entertaining and well written. i happen to be a fan of turtles! |
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Re: Turtles (Those evil creatures)
(User Rating: 1 ) by afterdark on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 08:11:42 PM AEST (User
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Yeah ok |
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Re: Turtles (Those evil creatures)
(User Rating: 1 ) by hellsfallenangel on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 12:36:33 PM AEST (User
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sweet write i had a snapping turtle once and it bit everyone but me well g2g bye bye
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Re: Turtles (Those evil creatures)
(User Rating: 1 ) by jesusofholland on
Monday, 28th April 2008 @ 09:07:13 AM AEST (User
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Since when do fingers have faces? And what the devil were you doing with your...fingers so close to the turtle. Better yet, don't tell me. I'd rather not know. |
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