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Desperation

Contributed by LevyMetal on Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 07:56:13 PM in AEST
Topic: ChristianPoetry

Wide awake, im feeling the weight of my desperation
Im already late, to feel love from the inside
I close my eyes, im feeling my weakness form a circle
Im ready to heal, inspite of time i make room for growth
Lets get this straight, do you feel the weight im feeling?
Your already two minutes late, do you feel the love im harboring?
Open your eyes, shy away from the attempt to break the cycle
Your already healed, inspite of all your flaws and regrets
They come, they go, they stay forgiven.
We come, we run, we are forgiven.
I stay alert, knowing im ready to break in a second
Dull become meak, just to feel from the inside
Hands stay in a fist, ready to bruise any encouragment
Wounds disappear, my lessons become scars inside me...
Wide awake, im feeling the weight of my desperation
Im already late, to feel love from the inside
I close my eyes, im feeling my weakness form a circle

Copyright © LevyMetal ... [ 2005-01-12 19:56:13]
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Re: Desperation (User Rating: 1 )
by weepingprophet on Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 11:57:11 PM AEST
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I'm surprised to find this labeled as "religious" it doesn't strike that chord for me. Weakness is the inability to determine what is going on it's the confusion. You said it was too late to feel the love from the inside, so that would be strength to know your capability or your inability to be loved.

~Everything is impossible, that's what we all think until we break it down to individuality.~weepingprophet

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