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Finally it Pours
Contributed by
girltranscended
on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 07:22:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Finally it pours
wet - sentiment
release ensues
bemused.
(Yet unused)
It is adrift upon the sea -
of fairytale you
and fantasy me
A circling flood -
prolific,
water at the gates
words upon the page.
A pivoting flow -
cryptic,
anticipate fate
regain the lost sage.
(Yet rage)
He is awash and out to sea -
with mythical you
and moonlit me
While dutifully the oars
cut - redundant
uniquely reused
excused.
Copyright ©
girltranscended
... [
2005-01-12 19:22:40]
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Re: Finally it Pours
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by Diatribe on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 07:34:27 PM AEST
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| WOW! I loved this... great work here. |
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Re: Finally it Pours
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by the_Ghost_Moth on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 07:42:27 PM AEST
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Real as eggs and toast.
Nice write.
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Re: Finally it Pours
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by autumngreeneyes on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 12:04:45 AM AEST
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| awsome..really great. |
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Re: Finally it Pours
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by pixie on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 05:28:17 AM AEST
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your style is amazing, great work
pix xx |
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Re: Finally it Pours
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 01:16:15 PM AEST
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He is awash and out to sea -
with mythical you
and moonlit me
You have a wonderful flair and vibrancy in your writing - such descriptions that leap off the page -
Nice job |
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