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Unfinished Feeling
Contributed by
Amal
on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 07:00:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Like a lost soul never rests for eternity,
Some unfinished feeling I hold inside of me,
For you, my lost love,
Never managed to reveal,
Moving on is too loaded and slow,
As your image before my eyes ever glows,
Walking in circles and roam,
Where forward and backward reach one end,
Futilely I move to no end and fro,
This unfinished emotion
A quicksand whirls in your heart,
In every try to leave,
Attempts are doomed to linger.
Copyright ©
Amal
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2005-01-12 19:00:11]
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Re: Unfinished Feeling
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by prozac_memory on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 07:44:57 AM AEST
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this a well written poem.
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Re: Unfinished Feeling
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 03:43:21 PM AEST
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| Great write! |
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