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Sweet
Contributed by
naughtygurl
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Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 06:15:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Close my eyes and lay to rest
let out a sigh as i start to drift
I cry
as all my pain comes back
and wonder why
theres nothing left
Nothing to look foward to ,
something hides beneath,
where no where lies with
my last breath
may lay to rest
so sweet.
Copyright ©
naughtygurl
... [
2005-01-12 18:15:14]
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Re: Sweet
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by afterdark on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 07:18:21 PM AEST
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| To short for what I like..But it was still very good.. |
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Re: Sweet
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by autumngreeneyes on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 08:09:06 PM AEST
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| I like this..it was short, but it was good..mine seem to be getting longer and longer..lol |
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Re: Sweet
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 02:07:46 AM AEST
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Aww that was really sweet, a very creative short write.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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