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Don't Let Go

Contributed by LolitaMarionette on Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 05:48:57 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



I wish I could fall asleep in your arms
Be dazzled by your many charms

I want you to hold on and never let go
I want your feelings to show

I want you to cuddle
When cold, we can huddle

We can leave this place
Stuck in each others embrace

Don’t let go, no don’t let go

We can stay together
Through all kinds of weather

Throughout the ages
Our book of many pages

Our love will live on
Even when we’re gone

Forever through time
Just like this rhyme

Don’t let go, no don’t let go

Our song will never end
Together we will blend

Forever as one
We’ll never be done

Hold me tight
All through the night

If you do this, I’ll do the same
Our love burning like a flame

Don’t let go...no don’t let go




Copyright © LolitaMarionette ... [ 2005-01-12 17:48:57]
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Re: Don't Let Go (User Rating: 1 )
by wetnwild on Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 06:14:36 PM AEST
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Hey great poem! I can totaly relate! Keep up the good work!
Luv, wetnwild


Re: Don't Let Go (User Rating: 1 )
by Unheard_Mute on Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 10:03:22 PM AEST
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another great one hannah...

I felt something hurting as I read this... it reminded me of what I used to want... the black and pink... silly dreams, I gave up on those... but at least I know it's true now... or at least can happen...
anyway, it's obvious I don't look for such things anymore, she doesn't need me, but she's with me... I'll settle for that... he was lucky hannah, that's why he's so sad all the time, that's why he's depressed, he knows he lost something good... good write


Re: Don't Let Go (User Rating: 1 )
by O7NeVeS on Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 02:06:41 AM AEST
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I really liked this poem, and how it flowed. TD


Re: Don't Let Go (User Rating: 1 )
by prozac_memory on Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 07:49:15 AM AEST
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good write.
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