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Morning Dark
Contributed by
luinil
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Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 05:13:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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blade kiss softly skin unbroken
blood scream violent vows unspoken
eyes betray your wandering sight
sun rouse up the thundering night
wind bite coldly paling face
feet uphold a trailing pace
waves embrace breath restrained
angel crave pure death contained
yesterday veil warning mark
life break empty morning dark
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luinil
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2005-01-12 17:13:20]
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Re: Morning Dark
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 05:19:37 PM AEST
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Wow...
I love this. The flow is so great and this is so deep.
Awesome write!
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Re: Morning Dark
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by wolfman on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 05:24:25 PM AEST
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very sad and yes it is dark
So much is said here with so little words but so much remains unsaid, the rythem was good made it easy to read the symbolism and imagery were very good,and very emotional. very very good do post again.
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Re: Morning Dark
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by pixie on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 05:30:58 AM AEST
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short and deep, excellently penned
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