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This Hand
Contributed by
Jen54
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Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 04:40:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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This hand that you see
Is very close to me
Its wiped away my tears
That have come from my deepest fears
Never knowing how many will come
But like always its more than some
One day soon this all should end
And this hand will still be my friend
Copyright ©
Jen54
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2005-01-12 16:40:46]
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Re: This Hand
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 04:49:29 PM AEST
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| Nice write. |
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Re: This Hand
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by afterdark on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 05:07:47 PM AEST
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| I really liked this |
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Re: This Hand
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 06:16:12 PM AEST
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| Cute. I like it. Short, simple, kinda sad while at the same time, sweet. |
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Re: This Hand
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 06:16:18 PM AEST
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| Cute. I like it. Short, simple, kinda sad while at the same time, sweet. |
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Re: This Hand
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 06:16:19 PM AEST
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| Cute. I like it. Short, simple, kinda sad while at the same time, sweet. |
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Re: This Hand
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 06:20:16 PM AEST
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Oops. Sorry bout the triple post =^D
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