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Lost Forever
Contributed by
AllSmiles
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Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 04:33:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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As I sit secluded in this lonely place
I close my eyes and see your face
You left me for a greater dream
I wasn’t enough as it would seem
I cared for you more than anyone
I thought that my love race was won
I thought that we would be forever
Till you left me a note with the word
‘Never’
Copyright ©
AllSmiles
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2005-01-12 16:33:40]
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Re: Lost Forever
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by craz2 on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 04:37:49 PM AEST
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| I liked this. Sometimes what we think we've lost forever dones't always stay gone forever.If this was about you losing someone just keep looking |
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Re: Lost Forever
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 05:02:31 PM AEST
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Aww! This is so sad!
I love it though. It's so good. |
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Re: Lost Forever
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by afterdark on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 05:10:19 PM AEST
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| Get used to this hun,,It will not be the last time..This poem is very well wrote. |
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Re: Lost Forever
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by MorbidDeath on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 06:16:15 PM AEST
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Short yet very descrptive love it,
Keep it up your an awesome writer |
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Re: Lost Forever
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by prozac_memory on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 07:51:50 AM AEST
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i love this, really sad but its a great write
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Re: Lost Forever
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd February 2010 @ 01:12:00 AM AEST
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Simple but very well said. Thank you for an enjoyable read.
Tim |
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