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Fear
Contributed by
shy_band_geek
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Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 04:11:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Fear.
It's a monster living inside of my heart and my mind.
It only hides inside when it wants too. But comes out when you're around.
Fear.
It attacks my heart when i think about you.
When i dream about you.
It creeps out when the courage comes.
It destroys my words that I wish I could say.
Fear.
It's what has been preventing me from telling you how i feel.
It's an ongoing fight that I have yet to win.
Yet, I think this time Fear has won yet again.
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Re: Fear
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by bonita2689 on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 04:20:29 PM AEST
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| Yes, I think fear finds us all in the battle of love...Nice write... |
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Re: Fear
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by wolfman on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 04:34:08 PM AEST
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it is true, fear does pick its moments and we can do little to stop it, its joy is our pain and suffering it only makes it stronger as we get weaker.
this was a good one I liked it, it tells the truth about why we have trouble with telling the ones we love that we love them. doen very well. please post again.
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Re: Fear
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by crazygirl on
Saturday, 7th May 2005 @ 11:55:53 AM AEST
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| its really good but it just shows how emotions can keep us from showing our true feelings. |
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