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I Almost....

Contributed by TheRavenousOne on Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 03:39:13 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I'm almost gone.
I'm almost finished.
I almost quit.
I almost snaped a few necks.
I almost did a lot of things.

I almost died.
I almost cried.
I almost broke a friendship.
I almost was okay.
But I ***** it up again.

I almost did a lot of things
I almost broke his heart
I almost broke a few bones
I almost took a dart
I almost fell down never to get up
I almost walked alone in the rain
I almost walked in the dark

I almost slit my wrist,
I almost started to belive.
I almost started to try,
I almost dared to be.
I almost was alive.. tho I was almost never dead..
I almost did stupid things,
I almost listened to the voices in my head

I almost broke a few bones
I almost lost my eye
I almost lost my face to you
I almost took that drug
I almost lost YOU

Copyright © TheRavenousOne ... [ 2005-01-12 15:39:13]
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Re: I Almost.... (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfman on Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 04:00:53 PM AEST
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that is true that we almost do thing that we dont want to but there is always some one there to help us, dont give up your friends and people who care will help.

this is amazing that you traded off lines it came out so naturaly I love the flow (a bit repetitive) good work you two. do another one together.

wolfman

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