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My Chambers
Contributed by
Sinned
on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 01:35:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
secrets
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My chambers
Come in whoever you art
From out of the light into the dark
Come into my foggy mist
I wring my wrist Nervously
For I fear what you will see
In the sunlight you should bask
No you came in and I hadn't ask
Now that you are here
I set aside and hide my fear
In this compartment you see light
Small and cute it's all my Gods insite
Over here you can see what is dear
Family friends and a bottle of beer
Now watch your step this is my chamber of mess
Worldly things I love to caress
Over here everything for which I care
Er'yeah, there's much room to spare
This one you will like its nature with all of its beauty
Sure keeps me busy avoiding eternities duty
Stay away from that room its dark and deep
You needen't know what enters and seeps
Enter into the seven day chamber He set aside
Not much here I busied myself with things of the world wide
Now this chamber holds my memories
My childhood days aunts uncles friends and family
Many are gone now and I feel sad
Then again those were some of the best days I had
O' you peeked into my box of the obscene
I blush at my adult things you now have seen
Now I shall take you out of here
Before you see the thing I fear
My chamber thats dark and deep
Every stench with an awful reek
My mortal sins the dung of earth
Wouldn't want anyone to know my true worth
You traveled the chambers of my mind
If you had stayed without you would have known a man of a different kind
Sinned
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Re: My Chambers
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by wolfman on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 03:44:01 PM AEST
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yes we do hide things within ourselves that we dont want others to see but they will find them out eventualy dont stay within your self for to long you might not want to come back.
this was a good poem nicely done imagery, I liked this poem alot please post again soon.
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Re: My Chambers
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 03:56:06 PM AEST
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Fascinating. All the compartments we divide ourselves into. Mine has always been more mushed up, but I'll get it organized one day. This is quite an interesting summation.
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