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Obscure entity
Contributed by
little_genna
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Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 01:07:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Loathe myself enough,
Now this has made it so tough.
Wasted friendship,
A world changing grip.
I can feel a sickness inside,
I am sorry I ever lied.
I am far from perfect.
I cause a lot of conflict.
An unhealthy element of life,
Causing a whole load of strife.
You should walk away,
No one should ever stay.
An obscure entity
SJ
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little_genna
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2005-01-12 13:07:29]
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Re: Obscure entity
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by skyblumoon on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 01:29:11 PM AEST
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Just a word of advice, don't be so hard on yourself. We all make mistakes. I hope things get better for you. I'm hear if you need to talk.
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Re: Obscure entity
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 01:33:10 PM AEST
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a very sad and dark write, hope your pain eases for you soon *hugs*
pix xx |
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Re: Obscure entity
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 01:17:50 AM AEST
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| Such sadness in your words. Always remember when one door ends. A new one always opens. Keep your head up.... A truly beautiful poem. |
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Re: Obscure entity
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by Lost_Shadow on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 06:26:09 AM AEST
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| I am real sorry that I weren't there. We should meet so we can catch up on things either way. |
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Re: Obscure entity
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by Mangs on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 11:45:24 AM AEST
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| you are so much more....beautiful....wish u could see through my eyes |
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