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A Treasure
Contributed by
BRUCE
on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 12:37:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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A Treasure
Have you ever dreamed of someday
finding A Treasure
A wonderful, enchanting, beautiful lady
who brings you nothing but pleasure
How lucky was I, the day that we met
A Treasure, beyond my wildest dream
To say that you are perfect for me
in every aspect, you are supreme
I adore you from head to toe
every inch of your body and mind
A wonder, in every way possible
in this world, one of a kind
My own treasure, in my heart
making me richer, beyond belief
I feel sometimes, in my thoughts
I am the worlds greatest thief
Having stolen your heart
and blessed with your love and care
Being given the unbelievable opportunity
for all this happiness to share
Copyright ©
BRUCE
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2005-01-12 12:37:35]
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Re: A Treasure
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 12:42:33 PM AEST
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such a lovely write, delightful to read,
pixie xx |
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Re: A Treasure
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by SmokinJoeEvil on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 12:49:10 PM AEST
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| I liked it. A few of the lines express thoughts that don't seem to be completed in the following lines. Some of the rhyming seems forced... which is odd since the rhythm is fairly easily discernable. Nice poem. |
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Re: A Treasure
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by Stew on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 12:22:12 AM AEST
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this is beautiful!:) i love it so much! i wish a man would write such beautiful poetry like that to me. but i don't believe there are men out there my age that do that sort of thing anymore. a woman can only wish!
love
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