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Filthy Mind
Contributed by
pixie
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Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 12:19:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Filthy mind stop thinking,
I know at the devil you are winking,
Coaxing him into your bed,
Imagining dirty things inside your head.
He won’t want you you’re not really bad,
He wants you to be the most evil girl he’s had,
He wishes for you to kill as many as you can,
Only then he will be your one woman man.
Take this knife & make the devil smile,
Kill & slice do something really vile,
Then he will adore you I promise,
He will wait on your every wish.
Go on lose your conscience,
It will be at someone else’s expense,
Think of them as a voodoo doll,
Then you’ll be his lover, the devils moll.
Killing is nothing it’s the in thing these days,
Just laugh as all that blood sprays,
Just think you will be in his bed tonight,
Remember my words hold onto them tight.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2005-01-12 12:19:44]
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Re: Filthy Mind
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by skyblumoon on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 12:24:21 PM AEST
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Very different and strange poem. For some reason I rather enjoyed it. Keep up the good poems.
Hugs Blu |
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Re: Filthy Mind
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 12:25:31 PM AEST
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*raises eyebrow* Mad? Insane?
Heehee. Love it.
I dunno how you do it, I really don't.
Great dark write, sweetie.
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: Filthy Mind
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by Kratur on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 12:52:44 PM AEST
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| i think you're Rob Zombie's dream gurl |
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Re: Filthy Mind
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by Fwog on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 12:55:52 PM AEST
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G'day pixie,
Wow what can one say, the flow of this is wonderful. I find it a very unusual poem, but boy do I love the theme.
A n exciting, brilliant write. You have soooooo much talent.
Hugz
Fwog |
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Re: Filthy Mind
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 12:58:12 PM AEST
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Kriss you have such a filthy mind lol j/k. A great write very weird even for you but non the less its written well and i love the flow.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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Re: Filthy Mind
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 02:06:31 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this one a great deal! I like the dark twisted side of you pixie. I too, have a dark sense of humor. I once created and alter ego for another poetry site....KILL2NITE, where I posted nothing but poems with horror themes which had elements of humor in them.
I really dig this work. Wonderful! Brutal!! |
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Re: Filthy Mind
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by DorianChambers on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 03:10:30 PM AEST
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the art of playing with the art itself, if u were a book
you'd have your shelf . . . pixie your a geinus . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Filthy Mind
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by wolfman on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 03:52:33 PM AEST
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this truly was a desterbing one but it is true do what he wants and he will make it seem like he loves you, but I digress that is a lie he will give yoiu things so he can take you down
I dont know why but i really liked this one the flow was smooth and word play was excalent, very good read you later
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Re: Filthy Mind
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 09:37:30 AM AEST
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I really liked this poem.. It was well written. keep up the good work!! i like your poems!!!
~:: christina :: ~ |
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Re: Filthy Mind
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by CJo on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 10:03:04 AM AEST
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| Really enjoyed this one! I like the fact that it's twisted and so well-written. Great imagination... |
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