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Contributed by
karmen
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Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 06:53:46 AM in AEST
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Laying deep inside,
Got to run and hide,
lurking around the corner,
feeling like a mourner,
knowing its there,
don't really care,
fighting through the pain,
trying to not go insane,
these marks on my arms,
definitely not charms,
the blood that once came out,
is forever over with out doubt,
more like with hope,
with the hurt, I must cope,
all my fears,
just turned into tears,
sometimes I wonder why,
I wanted myself to die,
I don’t really know,
I was just feeling so low,
Things seem better now,
I just don’t know how.
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karmen
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2005-01-12 06:53:46]
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 06:55:21 AM AEST
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I have read a good few of your poems and I am impressed, I should comment on yours more
pixie xx |
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 08:13:30 AM AEST
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i really liked your poem. my favourite part was from line 9 to line to line 12.
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by Jezabel on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 09:49:17 AM AEST
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| sad & then hopeful. good luv |
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by autumngreeneyes on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 10:06:18 AM AEST
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| I've read it three times and I still don't understand the "got to run and hide"..because it sounds to me like you aren't hiding any more.. I like the poem but an a bit confused.. |
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