|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
so much time to waste away
Contributed by
row
on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 05:57:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
|
so much time to waste away
we have nothing else to do
don't blame us
we are but young
we are but innocent
we've just woken up
and we're not all morning people
don't shame us
you were young once too
with nothing else to do
Copyright ©
row
... [
2005-01-12 05:57:53]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: so much time to waste away
(User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 10:10:04 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| as always I enjoy your style..pausing with the commas, gives the read a specific sound that I enjoy. and...you mention lily-of-the-valley..my favorite flower. old fashioned, but so dear, I just love that. |
|
|
Re: so much time to waste away
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 02:58:21 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Great write! Short but powerful. I loved it. |
|
|
Re: so much time to waste away
(User Rating: 1 )
by Stej on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 08:50:39 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| good work rowza...reminds me of wasting time on the internet |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
