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shattered beyond repair
Contributed by
mina-1
on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 05:26:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I'm a shattered piece, a fragment
from your life
You discarded me and all you gave
me was strife
You used me, abused me and I lived
with your lies
Now I'm just a fragment piece with no
bonding ties
I'm unfixable, I'm far beyond repair
All you gave me was heartache and
despair
The fragmented pieces lay broken in bits
After been shattered by a dozen hits
Scattered memories of these fragile
pieces remain
Sharp cutting edges bare my blood
stains
I'm a discarded fragment from your life
that lays dead
I hope and pray someone screws with
your head
Til the time comes this shattered fragment
remains
Scattered, unfixable and bearing the shame.
Copyright ©
mina-1
... [
2005-01-12 05:26:05]
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Re: shattered beyond repair
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 05:52:29 AM AEST
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| this was an awesome poem....uve portrayed ur feelings very well and i love ur word use. well done, its very sad. hope u r ok |
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Re: shattered beyond repair
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 06:18:02 AM AEST
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very sad and deep, expressed well *hugs* pm me if you need a friend ok hun?
pixie xx |
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Re: shattered beyond repair
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by jmpy84 on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 03:00:42 PM AEST
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| awsome very emotional |
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Re: shattered beyond repair
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by DorianChambers on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 04:07:18 PM AEST
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a verry heartfelt poem, sorry 4 your pain . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: shattered beyond repair
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by lostlady38 on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 08:10:43 PM AEST
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| whoa! very deep ...excellent wording here. anyone who can't feel your pain after reading this is numb from the inside out. amazing piece of work. love this one. impressive |
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Re: shattered beyond repair
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by Whitelightning77 on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 10:12:23 PM AEST
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heartfelt write with sadness and pain conveyed. thanks again for sharing and keep writing!
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