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behind closed doors
Contributed by
karmen
on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 01:07:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Behind closed doors,
you never know whats happening,
or whats already happened.
Behind closed doors,
you don't see a thing,
you don't really know,
what people are saying,
and what there really doing.
Behind closed doors,
you don't see me,
you don't see my fear,
my hurt,
my pain,
my tears.
Behind closed doors,
you can't see what I'm doing,
marks I'm making,
rules I'm breaking,
mistakes I'm causing.
Behind closed doors,
is where you stay,
so you don't have to deal,
with this so called,
burden in your life,
me.
Behind closed doors.
Copyright ©
karmen
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2005-01-12 01:07:47]
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Re: behind closed doors
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 01:16:12 AM AEST
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sounds like you need to talk to someone .
I can relate to what your saying .but remember this your not a burden and don't ever think that.
take care |
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Re: behind closed doors
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 02:10:17 AM AEST
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| oh my goodness this is an excellent write....and its soooo sad, dont ever feel like no one cares about you, im sure many people do. im so sorry u feel this way, try and keep hope. but i do love this poem...uve portrayed loneliness and isolation very well. keep writing |
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Re: behind closed doors
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by CurtisC on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 02:54:55 AM AEST
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| this is really good, i like it a lot. Like someone already stated you capture isolation very well. Open up the doors in your life and maybe everyone else will too :) |
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