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To be alone
Contributed by
jishes_4_ever
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Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 11:13:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I never really new what to be alone really felt like
That is until I lost you
Now I sit wondering
Did I do the wrong thing
Should I have done more to keep you here with me
So many questions
No answers
I wish you would come back to me
Be with me forever
Hold me in your arms
And never let me go
I wish to kiss you just once more
But you are gone forever
With some other girl
Wish it could have lasted
But I guess it happened for a reason
All I know is that I've never felt worse
Then I do with out you here
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2005-01-11 23:13:00]
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Re: To be alone
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 11:46:13 PM AEST
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This is such a heartbreaking write.
I know what it's like to finally realize there's feelings and love there only to have it be too late.
Have you told him how you feel?
I wish you the very best. |
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Re: To be alone
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 12:40:24 AM AEST
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Wow that was really an emotional poem, i know how you feel about losing someone. Good poem.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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Re: To be alone
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by O7NeVeS on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 01:12:38 AM AEST
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| this was a beautiful poem. and i can definitely relate, it sux doesn't it! anyway keep it up...things will get better. TD |
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Re: To be alone
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 02:19:38 AM AEST
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| awww this is very sad and i love it sooo much. i can relate to how ur feelin and thanku very much for sharing.....i wrote a poem "Come Back to Me" on the same kind of subject, so u might like that :) again this is a lovely write and i want to tell u r not alone, thanku again. take care |
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Re: To be alone
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 06:20:40 AM AEST
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losing someone can be so hard, hope your pain heals for you soon, a well expressed poem, full of feelings
pixiexx |
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