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He's Gone
Contributed by
Elf
on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 09:55:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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As I sit here, now in the sanctity of my room, I am able to think clearly once again.
With no music playing, & no distractions surrounding me, I can finally ponder on the events & thoughts of the day.
I light my candle, sit on my floor, close my eyes, & open my mind....................
The beat of my heart pulses in my ears, yet all I can hear is him telling me that he’ll never hurt me, or ever leave; that he loves me. The sharp cinnamon scent of the candle drifts across my face, but all I can smell is the sweet smell of his cologne as he holds me close enough to him that I can hear his heart beat as well as my own. The heat from the candle warms my hands, yet all I can feel is his touch; filled with tenderness, love & care. Over the sound of my own heart, is the melody of a time long since past. I am carried up with the song; higher until I can no longer see the world below. All that remains is he & I, standing strong together when everyone else had fallen. Soon after, the melody of the song falls, carrying me back to Earth, where I am criticized for who I am, & the people I know.
The music stops, & I am thrust back into reality..... He’s gone..........
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Elf
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2005-01-11 21:55:21]
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Re: He's Gone
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by O7NeVeS on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 01:16:47 AM AEST
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| I think it's great how u put ur thoughts down on paper. I'm sure everyone can relate to this, i kno i definitely can. TD |
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Re: He's Gone
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by Hypersensitive on
Sunday, 7th May 2006 @ 12:18:04 AM AEST
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| i think you captured the feeling perfectly. i have felt that way before and you put it well. |
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