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Want to die (fixed!!!!)
Contributed by
AngelEmmA
on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 08:53:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I know you hear me
i know you can see
to my heart you hold the key
within my screams ringing
you awake
scared for my unlively being
my whole body aches
sleeping in a painfull cold sweat
wishing that we never met
feeling the blood run
never wanting to see the sun
i know your watching
my soul shatter
as if to you i matter
you can't understand
why i cry
well because of you
i want to die
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AngelEmmA
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2005-01-11 20:53:59]
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Re: Want to die (fixed!!!!)
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 08:56:36 PM AEST
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| very well done. written well and everything. you had some very nice rhymes too. i never want to see the sun either, but thats after i had to stare into it for 10 minutes today. |
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Re: Want to die (fixed!!!!)
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by Dragontear27 on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 09:39:32 PM AEST
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| Awsome write very emotional. ~~lates~~ |
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