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Let Me Yell
Contributed by
breny
on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 08:51:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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you are my world
my everything
you light up my life
and love you bring
But when you treat me
with constant disrespect
I think about you less
and the less that i expect
you are so disappointing
you screw everything up
i don't want your damn excuses
i want you to shut up
Please just let me yell
for once just let me vent
and know when I'm done
that none of it I meant
God help me, but I love you
I still dream of you at night
even after all you do
and all the times we fight
I know that you are human
and we all do things wrong
but I swear, one more screw up
and forever won't be long
Copyright ©
breny
... [
2005-01-11 20:51:55]
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Re: Let Me Yell
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by O7NeVeS on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 08:56:17 PM AEST
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| well at least you were able to vent in ur poem. I really enjoyed it! TD |
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Re: Let Me Yell
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 08:58:23 PM AEST
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| i love it when people get their feelings, point, etc across in a poetic way. anyone can write something that expresses what they think or feel, but doing it poetically is different. |
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Re: Let Me Yell
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by Writting_Fever on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 10:05:33 PM AEST
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| way to get out your feelings! good job |
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