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Lost In The Dark
Contributed by
Cynthia
on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 08:26:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Lost in the dark
as I feel eyes following me,
surrounded by ghastly moans
they won't let me be.
Eyes follow me
most every night,
glowing crimson eyes
such a horrible sight.
I feel as though
I'm trapped within my dreams,
noone there to hear
my frightning screams.
Lost in the dark
when I enter my dreams,
glowing crimson eyes
always following me.
Copyright Cynthia Jones
Jan.9/2005
Copyright ©
Cynthia
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2005-01-11 20:26:56]
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Re: Lost In The Dark
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by afterdark on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 08:36:39 PM AEST
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| Very good post..I loved the last stanza here.. |
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Re: Lost In The Dark
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 08:42:35 PM AEST
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| I really enjoyed this,good write |
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Re: Lost In The Dark
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 09:04:13 PM AEST
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| excellent write. i do believe that you have a talent for writing about any topic and in any format. =] |
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Re: Lost In The Dark
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by shamateur on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 09:09:42 PM AEST
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| I really liked this, sometimes it seems like there is no on to hear your screams. Excellent job |
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Re: Lost In The Dark
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by TaintedSoul on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 09:09:47 PM AEST
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this has such a devious feel to it. Reminds me of a nightmare that pops up from time to time. Great write.
peace
TS |
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Re: Lost In The Dark
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 06:22:53 AM AEST
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brillaint and dark Cynthia, I loved this alot :)
pixie xx |
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Re: Lost In The Dark
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 07:31:34 PM AEST
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| Awesome write. Good job. |
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