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Bleeding Hearts Second Chances
Contributed by
waos
on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 07:32:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Read the poems of yesterday,
see the aged faces grow;
in lue of memories and light
we undergo surgery for the show.
Read of feelings past,
yet prayed for, begged for;
despite pain and reluctance,
despite broken promises swore.
Read captions of forever
that crack canyons in a stone heart;
grip the stems of roses,
bleed on thorns and call it art.
Remember embraces, promises,
remember moonlight and dances.
Remember music, laughter.
Remember love.
Long for past to become present,
for present an eternity;
meekly ask for renewed skies,
for arms to wrap myself in nightly.
Deny fear opportunity to fracture hope,
to crumble frozen leaves and unweave.
Fight shadowy scars and images
working only to deceive.
Hold this beating, bleeding heart within my hands
and hope for future's sutures to heal.
Stare beneath willowy lashes to slashed hope
and renew what once grew, I appeal.
Remember, love;
second chances.
Remember.
Copyright ©
waos
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2005-01-11 19:32:37]
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Re: Bleeding Hearts Second Chances
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 08:35:05 PM AEST
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Well I'll remember one thing... what a great
poem this was. This was just so beautifully
poetic I wish I could only write half as good as
this... I think this is my favourite by you. The
whole poem was great, but these lines stood
out in particular.
"grip the stems of roses,
bleed on thorns and call it art."
and
"Hold this beating, bleeding heart within my hands
and hope for future's sutures to heal.
Stare beneath willowy lashes to slashed hope
and renew what once grew, I appeal."
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Bleeding Hearts Second Chances
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by allforyou on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 09:55:41 PM AEST
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You are very talented. I absolutely love this poem...I hope the guy you love comes to his senses and realizes he probably loves you too.
--Kara |
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Re: Bleeding Hearts Second Chances
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 01:49:27 AM AEST
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Awesome, deep-n-very touching.
I pray u get your second chance.
huggs, luv,
emy |
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Re: Bleeding Hearts Second Chances
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by allforyou on
Wednesday, 19th September 2018 @ 04:40:27 AM AEST
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Still love this 13 years later!
-Kara aka allforyou |
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