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They Don't...
Contributed by
Mesano
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Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 07:04:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I'm not the perfect daughter,
That my parents try to see,
It's just not who I am,
And it's who I'll never be.
They don't care what I want,
They don't know who I am,
They know not of my poetry,
Or that I'm in love with Sam.
They don't care what I need,
They don't know my deep desire,
They don't feel the emotions,
That set my heart on fire.
I want to see them do it,
See them live my life,
Anger, hatred, love, and pain,
Let's see them sheath the knife.
Copyright ©
Mesano
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2005-01-11 19:04:57]
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Re: They Don't...
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 07:12:15 PM AEST
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Goodness, I remember feeling like this. Never got to the knife part, but these feelings were still haunting me many years later.
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Re: They Don't...
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by wray on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 07:19:01 PM AEST
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| Woo go the angst :) How fortunate for Sam that his name rhymed with am ;) |
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Re: They Don't...
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by feathercut on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 07:27:00 PM AEST
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i will not eat green eggs and ham
i could not would not sam i am
go on opera and talk about spam
your parents love you bla bla blam
grow up and stop writing crap
oops that doesnt rhyme with
sam
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Re: They Don't...
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by tractorbabe on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 09:35:39 PM AEST
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this is a great poem ...it descibes so much thats so ture ..please keep writing
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Re: They Don't...
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 10:01:26 PM AEST
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| brilliant and amazing poem. full of emotion. written well. as long as you have a good head on your shoulders, no one else is needed for anything. |
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Re: They Don't...
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 10:21:01 PM AEST
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| Well..I enjoyed this,good write |
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Re: They Don't...
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by BuggY on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 03:47:47 AM AEST
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Well dun hunni!!! great poem!!! keep writing!!
And whoeva u r who sed it was crap.... get lost it was great!!!
hayley xxx |
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Re: They Don't...
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by BuggY on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 03:47:48 AM AEST
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Well dun hunni!!! great poem!!! keep writing!!
And whoeva u r who sed it was crap.... get lost it was great!!!
hayley xxx |
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Re: They Don't...
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by Dawny on
Friday, 17th March 2006 @ 05:41:54 AM AEST
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Well personally I think this poem is very well written, I think Sam should get a personality transplant!!
Love Dawny |
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