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Blind Perfection
Contributed by
eternalnight4x
on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 06:35:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Feeling faint
A dizzy haze
Imperfect sight
Self-inflict fight
Mirror shattered
Dreams are battered
Ugly outside
Empty inside
Won’t consume
Habits resume
Skin and bones
Ribs are shown
Skin stained red
Problems bled
Flesh is marred
Heart is scarred
Paling skin
Nothing within
Hollowed eyes
Truth denied
Growing weak
Cannot speak
Starving life
Filled with strife
Imperfect soul
Hearts a hole
Will not stop
Until on top
With blind perfection
An immense deception
Self forgotten
Life forgotten
Lost the way
Fade away
Skin stained red
Problem bled
Skin and bones
Ribs are shown
Copyright ©
eternalnight4x
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2005-01-11 18:35:10] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Blind Perfection
(User Rating: 1 ) by Tru2Myself on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 10:58:31 PM AEST (User
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OOO.... shivers up the spine I LOVE THIS ONE! 'problem bled' 'growing weak, cannot speak' 'flesh is marred, heart is scarred.' OMG amazing lines! I LOVE YOUR POETRY!! ALL OF IT!
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