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So New
Contributed by
O7NeVeS
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Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 06:31:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Things are so new that I often forget
And say many things that I really regret
I’m still learning the things that you’re sensitive about
Because the last thing I want to make you do is pout
I don’t want to hurt you that’s not even a thought in my mind
All I want is for you to hold me and be no one else’s but mine
I wish you were at my side all day long
But we both know that couldn’t happen it’d be all wrong
If only you knew how incredibly deeply I care for you
You would run in the opposite direction as if I screamed “BOO!”
Then again I could be mistaken
Instead you may feel as if you’re in heaven
I hope your feelings are the latter of the two
Because if they weren’t I’d definitely feel blue
Funny thing is, I’m not really concerned
Cuz I feel as though I’m the one that is yearned
And for some odd reason I am not the least bit worried
Because I feel as though one day we’ll be married
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O7NeVeS
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2005-01-11 18:31:03]
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Re: So New
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by afterdark on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 06:48:01 PM AEST
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| Coud have been more to it..You clumped it all up into one big mess..The subject is good other then that..Other then the fact that love does not exsist. |
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Re: So New
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by PumpkinPie on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 12:10:49 AM AEST
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I,on the other hand,do believe that love exists,and I think this poem was nice to read.You poured your heart into it,which made it a very heartfelt write.
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Re: So New
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by Evilcaf on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 04:26:21 AM AEST
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| I lke this poem, can relate to it alot. well written and i hope things go well for you xx |
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Re: So New
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by CurtisC on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 09:03:04 PM AEST
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i dont know what afterdark is talking about, love definitely exists. obviously he or she has never felt it. besides that fact i think this poem was wonderful, some parts could have been done a little better, but all and all i thought it was great.
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Re: So New
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 12:45:22 PM AEST
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| Love is a *choice* we make, to devote (or not) ourselves to someone we lust after - at least in the case of intimate relationships. It exists because we make it so. Anyway, I think it may need some division and perhaps the lines are a bit long. But if that's your style, so be it. It's really an okay poem. Cheers! |
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Re: So New
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by Dec2three198five on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 11:41:31 PM AEST
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| I like this one. Who is this about? 33 |
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