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A lonely souls one desire
Contributed by
Gothchyk
on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 06:12:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The sun begins to fade
As I sit under a tree
Protected by it's shade
I realize my haven isn't free
Not knowing what to think
As I begin to tremble
Unable to blink
As I start to remember
Images of my past run through my mind
As it's myself I'm trying to find
So give me space and give me time
For it's the only thing I can't waste
I didn't leave in a haste
But still i found a bitter taste
I'm broken and colder than hell
Not able to tell
What happened long ago
I run to and fro
From my fear I have nowhere to go
Trying to hide but still wondering why
Fear and fate must sometime collide
Confronting my past will only make me crash
For once they know I become trash
Picture perfect is what i may seem
Wishing I were living a dream
Where everone was perfect
And everything a true fit
But dreams grow dark
Without the spark
That starts the fire
A lonely souls one desire
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Gothchyk
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2005-01-11 18:12:29]
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Re: A lonely souls one desire
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 06:28:28 PM AEST
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| "And everything a true fit." I hope we all find it, if it exists. Anyway, it's such a lonely write, like the one I just read before. These things grab at my sentimentality. *sighs* Blessings. |
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Re: A lonely souls one desire
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by EternalNight4x on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 06:37:43 PM AEST
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| excellent write, well expressed |
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Re: A lonely souls one desire
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by Addelyn on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 07:20:47 PM AEST
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| Your poems have a way of pulling my emotions out of me. Good job on an excellent poem! |
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Re: A lonely souls one desire
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 01:04:19 PM AEST
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Your emotions are very well expressed in this write. If it makes you feel any better, no one is perfect! So no one should expect you to be...I enjoyed this read, and dealing with the past can be a challenge...But time will not make it disappear, but dealing with those skeletons will help take the sting out of those ol' haunts...Keep up the writes, this is good.
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Re: A lonely souls one desire
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by Crim on
Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 07:40:45 PM AEST
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| The way you express emotions with words is amazing. Very well done. I could pull out alot of examples off of your poem to show what ive enjoyed but that would also not do justice to the parts i dont pick, so overall its a great poem. |
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