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Death to My Song
Contributed by
bonita2689
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Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 05:21:37 PM in AEST
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SadPoetry
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It breathes through me - my lonely song
waiting to be immersed in the powerful light of relief
yet fearful of releasing it's ballads to the outside world
it hides beneath the dawn of an unkempt morning
sinking to the depths of my fatal dreams
still breathing but becoming weaker
while it's fragile smile is smothered in lies
it waits to break through to find the lyric it desires
it drinks in the realm of the unknown
drunken with doubt it falls into pitiful despair
still breathing but becoming weaker
the cackling fires of darkness embrace it
choking its voice to a mere word
confined to it's prison, this dire word holds the last bit of strength
still breathing but becoming weaker
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bonita2689
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2005-01-11 17:21:37]
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Re: Death to My Song
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by mikeyd on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 05:25:52 PM AEST
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| I really like the strong use of words. Sometimes spur of the moment poetry can be the best, because you just let it come from inside, without worrying about how to word it. Nice job!!! Post More!! -M |
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Re: Death to My Song
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 05:25:55 PM AEST
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Hmm...it's a very interesting write.
Good work. |
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Re: Death to My Song
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by brok3nxstar on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 05:31:45 PM AEST
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| i really like the poem... it shows strong emotion .. awesome =) |
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Re: Death to My Song
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by Amal on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 06:07:51 PM AEST
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Oh this is so sad,,,
It reveals how much you love your words, your song eventually... And how cruel the world out there,,,
I really enjoyed it.. |
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Re: Death to My Song
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by Taurusgem1 on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 08:52:14 PM AEST
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| Very Beautiful |
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