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The Moon
Contributed by
LeMoNdRoP
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Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 04:57:22 PM in AEST
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I see the moon,
Her emptyness fills the sky
Some days i watch her blush as she aproaches her throne in the center of all
The moon sees me
Hidden, but yet unsure of who i am hidding from
Pieces of my soul lie schattered umongst the shards of my heart
The moon sees the somone that I wish to see
Each night we both see the same sky, same same stars....
Same moon
She is the only one who fully sees me
And the only one who sees you.
Yet she is sworn to secrecy
Never to reveal when i may gaze upon you
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LeMoNdRoP
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2005-01-11 16:57:22]
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Re: The Moon
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 05:17:19 PM AEST
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| could use a bit of editing or a spellchecker but other than that the point gets across rather well... good stuff |
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Re: The Moon
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 05:17:40 PM AEST
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"Yet she is sworn to secrecy
Never to reveal when i may gaze upon you"
That's so interesting...never thought of it that way.
Great write. |
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