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A Moment
Contributed by
LeMoNdRoP
on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 04:43:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I look up
your there
My eyes slowly meet yours
they lock
For only a moment
one that i wish could last forever
I call on you
your there
Words are passed between us
my heart grins
For only a moment
one that i wish could last forever
I arive to class
your there
You greet me with your smile
warmth fills my cheeks
For only a moment
one that i wish could last forever
Yet, it is only a moment
Copyright ©
LeMoNdRoP
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2005-01-11 16:43:27]
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Re: A Moment
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 04:51:33 PM AEST
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| Good write. I like how it came together in the end. |
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Re: A Moment
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by Evilnn on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 05:07:40 PM AEST
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nice write
very sweet
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