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30E
Contributed by
LevyMetal
on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 04:34:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I feel helpless now that your gone
I've turned to old bad habits once more
I find myself hindering my own fate
But hope is all i ever stood upon
This moment is now the only reality
That urge of release is what i had
This moment is now my only cry out
All i feel is this razor in my hand
I wish it were a hammmer
to endulge my skull at ease
and embed my tiny brain
on the floor next to me
i feel a little taken for granted
but who really has noticed
i see you faking friendlyness
that smirk is all you ever had
as if the tables would ever turn
ask me now if i'd give a damn
all i care for is this razor in my hand
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LevyMetal
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2005-01-11 16:34:46]
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Re: 30E
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by mina-1 on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 06:45:40 PM AEST
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sadness and pain expressed through ur poem. hope all is well for you.
on the other hand a good write.
take care,
sue |
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Re: 30E
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by Kimberley on
Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 08:12:59 AM AEST
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This poem is really good it has a lot of emotion involved in it
I have had feelings like that before but everything will get better you just have to give it time |
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Re: 30E
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by chefhmboyrd on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 09:46:28 AM AEST
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| we all need to be careful not to tie our whole exisitance to one person |
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