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Falling Flower Petals
Contributed by
Unheard_Mute
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Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 04:31:29 PM in AEST
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Roses ain't red and violets aren't blue,
And I really don't know what you expect me to do,
Cause I've been lookin for you, but you're never there,
And I'm startin to wonder if you truly care,
It just doesn't seem fair that I'm left behind,
And I can't seem to stop myself from losin my mind,
So as I'm fallin to my death all I hear is the crow,
Close my eyes and kiss the sky cause I'm just ready to go...
Float on in the breeze, ride a petal to the sky,
Then fall to the earth cause I'm so ready to die...
Float on in the breeze, ride a petal to the sky,
Then fall to the earth cause I'm so ready to die...
Violets ain't blue and roses aren't red,
Don't cry for me cause I'm already dead,
Said what I said, but it all went unheard,
So let this sad song be my final word,
I've laughed and I've cried, and I've died inside,
And all in all, it was a hell of a ride,
But when it's your time, hey, what can I say,
Except to just close your eyes and walk on into the grey...
Float on in the breeze, ride a petal to the sky,
Then fall to the earth cause I'm so ready to die...
Float on in the breeze, ride a petal to the sky,
Then fall to the earth cause I'm so ready to die...
Float on in the breeze, ride a petal to the sky,
Then fall to the earth cause I'm so ready to die...
Cause I'm so ready to die...
Goodbye...
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Unheard_Mute
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Re: Falling Flower Petals
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 04:37:58 PM AEST
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| Well if you really felt this, don't give up on your dreams. I don't know. I've been warned off on cliche' but the flowers and colors one works for me, although I can't speak for others. It'd make a good song I think. Cheers! |
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Re: Falling Flower Petals
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by Evilnn on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 04:41:19 PM AEST
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Very powerful - I would love to hear the music for these words- I can feel your pain.
I hope things get better for you, just keep on writing it really helps to release these emotions.
Take care
eve
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Re: Falling Flower Petals
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by mina-1 on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 05:03:10 PM AEST
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this is a great song and if u follow ur dreams,
you'll get there.
Would really love to hear this song sung.
well done.
cheers,
sue |
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Re: Falling Flower Petals
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by LolitaMarionette on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 05:31:55 PM AEST
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| A song? Different. I like it. Very sorrowful though. I hope you alright. I'd definatly listen to this over and over if it were to play. |
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Re: Falling Flower Petals
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 08:54:38 PM AEST
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awesome cuddlez!!!! come online now man, im missin ya
Ninja/Caiti |
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Re: Falling Flower Petals
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by Juggalette_chick666pk on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 06:58:18 PM AEST
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This was emotional full of hate :) I loved it. I would liek to hear the song sung so when you get a change send me a message so i can hear it. Nice write.
-Vicki- |
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Re: Falling Flower Petals
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 12:02:38 AM AEST
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::pout:: well you might be ready to die, but im not ready to let you die! so there! amazing and exceptional lyrics. im not too good on the guitar either. im better on the acoustic. it would also help if i knew more chords, i know mostly notes, etc. taking it one painful finger at a time, lol.
sorry for all of my funky comments on your poems, i was in a weird mood, so you get weird comments... |
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