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Eden
Contributed by
putteragain
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Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 04:20:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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The darkness i see is smothering
where is all the life?
How could we let shadows rule
they torture skin with knife
Erase the hate from history
what then would you see
Eden filled with fragrant bloom
peace for you and me
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2005-01-11 16:20:13]
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Re: Eden
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 04:41:23 PM AEST
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Utopian dreams. If only it were possible. But by the hand of man, all things are stained...
Nice short good write. Cheers! |
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Re: Eden
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by Evilnn on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 04:50:56 PM AEST
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very nice write
I like the end, it gives us hope
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Re: Eden
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by Rhymingron on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 05:53:39 PM AEST
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| Nice poem, but how do you erase anything from history? |
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Re: Eden
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 03:56:01 PM AEST
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| if we could erase the hate from history, we wouldve changed hisstory completely, whicjh i think it woulodve been perfect |
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