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Through The Eyes Of A Child
Contributed by
The_Phantom
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Wednesday, 4th December 2002 @ 05:20:00 PM in AEST
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Through the eyes of a child, I can't help but smile,
Not a single care, just as long as you play fair,
Give them something to eat, look both ways before you cross the street,
Hide and seek, settle down now it's time to go to sleep,
All of this brings back memories, just like learning my ABC's,
Through their eyes there's no race or color, everyone is a sister or bother,
There's no anger or hate, oh no don't eat the paste,
Only love in their eyes, and the innocent tears they cry,
Through the eyes of a child, curiosity runs wild,
We watch them grow, praying and hoping they have no foes,
We reach for them as they go out on a limb,
But we must let them go,so they can learn and grow,
We watch their eyes light up, at Christmas time with all the new stuff,
Their first tooth, hair cut, and while they grow up,
When they cry, and your confused on why,
When they break a bone, and your calling 911 on the phone,
Their first brithday cake, to their first heart break,
We watch them grow, hoping the world is better when they are old,
Teaching them wrong form right, comforting them on those scary nights,
Guiding them the entire way, you know I miss those days.
Forever Faithful
The Phantom
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Re: Through The Eyes Of A Child
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by OreO on
Thursday, 5th December 2002 @ 12:10:10 AM AEST
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Awww Phantom this is so sweet, and it's so sad at the end where you said you miss those days....this brought tears to my eyes, it's so beautifully written, kids are so special in so many ways they teach us adults alot in return as we do them....thanks for sharing this one i enjoyed it alot....
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Re: Through The Eyes Of A Child
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 5th December 2002 @ 09:57:59 AM AEST
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| Yes if we as adults could only see the innocents of a child! Loved this! Christina |
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Re: Through The Eyes Of A Child
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by PhantomsLDY on
Friday, 6th December 2002 @ 01:36:14 AM AEST
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| Babe this is another great write and could only come from someone who still is in touch with his inner child I love you anyway!!!!!! |
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Re: Through The Eyes Of A Child
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by Roshie on
Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 12:40:45 AM AEST
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| This is a brilliant poem, it really touched my heart. Keep it up :) |
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Re: Through The Eyes Of A Child
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 12:49:28 AM AEST
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Hey..better late than never!! I 'm sorry I missed this one..(Must have been busy at school..) This is terrific!! Yes, life would be so much better if we all saw things thru the eyes if children...
Jenni |
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Re: Through The Eyes Of A Child
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by Cynthia on
Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 11:30:05 PM AEST
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| The things my children do, remind me of when I was their age. Great write. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: Through The Eyes Of A Child
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by sunflower on
Thursday, 20th February 2003 @ 06:55:31 AM AEST
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if only we can see through those eyes of childhood, while still at innocence, what a pretty world this would be,
sweet poem |
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Re: Through The Eyes Of A Child
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by Rage on
Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 01:08:23 AM AEST
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| Ah, those days of innocence. I, too, long for those days. Great write, Phantom. |
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Re: Through The Eyes Of A Child
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by BlackFire9786 on
Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 05:52:28 PM AEST
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| Great write, once again, we all wish we could be kids again, things were so much simpler....Luv ya lotz-Lisa |
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Re: Through The Eyes Of A Child
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by The_Phantom on
Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 06:49:54 PM AEST
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Thank you all for your comments, they really help me to write. Thank you again.
The Phantom |
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