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Unhappy Ending
Contributed by
Kay-Kay
on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 03:34:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Unhappy Ending
Breaking into a sweat holding onto that knife.
Knowing that doing this will end my entire life.
Only people hurt and nobody saved.
Sudden attention was all that i craved.
Blood rushing to my head not knowing what to do.
The fatal cut wouldn't only hurt me, it would hurt you to.
A tear drips down my face knowing i will die.
Telling everyone to skip my funeral, and please do not cry.
Please don't fret because i'm on to a different place.
One thing i want you to do is remember my happy face.
Dear family, i feel bad about doing this today.
I truly didn't want to make you feel this way.
Please forgive me i am sorry if i made you feel sad.
I'm not sure if i will ever see you in the promise land.
And those were the last things that i ever wrote.
Now i really regret ever writing that stupid note.
~Kay-Kay
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Kay-Kay
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2005-01-11 15:34:51]
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Re: Unhappy Ending
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 05:12:46 PM AEST
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| Very good ,I loved the ending |
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Re: Unhappy Ending
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by Kratur on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 11:51:30 PM AEST
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the use of the lowercase "i" really kills your self-esteem and is excellent here... i think i read it at a weird instant in time because this one had a really big effect on me..
good write
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Re: Unhappy Ending
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by autumngreeneyes on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 03:49:49 PM AEST
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when I tried to end all my sad troubles
it was in a tub of foaming bloody bubbles
I felt as if I were acting alone, on rote
so I never thought to leave a note..
interesting write.. |
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