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best way
Contributed by
vampyrekiss
on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 02:33:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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dreaming of the cool touch
of the blade
gliding across my thighs
to watch
as the crimson blood
softly flows
dripping down
and another gash
behind the knee
this will take
the pain from me
lying here
as blood is pouring out
i think
was this the best way to go
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vampyrekiss
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2005-01-11 14:33:10]
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Re: best way
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 03:05:29 PM AEST
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| *shivers* Well it got to me. That's about the only thing I can say. Cheers! |
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Re: best way
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by Bruce on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 10:28:07 PM AEST
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| surely not the best way and don't even think about it |
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Re: best way
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 11:05:57 PM AEST
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That is surely not the best way to go.
and don't even think about it.good write.
take care. |
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