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You are of Glass
Contributed by
youknowwho
on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 01:59:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The painted perfection upon
your face of glass,
We pace ourselves now
to an unfamiliar sound.
The twinkiling light that once
shone so brightly beyond the blue of your eyes
has faded into a dim reflection of myself
telling you that I never wanted to know this.
As I watched you reach for my shaking hand
you looked so fragile standing out in the rain,
like you would shatter before me in an instant,
and I would never know it.
Maybe you're already broken,
into a million pieces of ambiguity.
You always loved to hide behind your words,
telling me that i never knew you
But I knew who you were,
the fading light struggling to be seen
in all of our eyes.
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youknowwho
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2005-01-11 13:59:58]
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Re: You are of Glass
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by TaintedSoul on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 02:10:59 PM AEST
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Deeply emotional write. You've spoken so much here in such little time. I am reminded of how some are when they cannot seem to let themselves shine through the masks they wear.
peace
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Re: You are of Glass
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 02:11:59 PM AEST
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| Poignantly perfect. I especially like the last sentence. Cheers! |
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Re: You are of Glass
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by Kamal on
Friday, 27th January 2006 @ 12:57:57 PM AEST
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I think your great thank you for the message..
I take wisdom seriously and I encourage you to keep writing for me.. |
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