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River Of Anxiety
Contributed by
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
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Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 12:11:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
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River Of Anxiety
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There is a river that runs through my veins
For each night I feel the pain
Desperate feelings of anticipation and loss
Undeniable guilt of cost
Wake up gasping for air
Carrying the worlds burdens and cares
Heart pounding, eyes swollen red
Sweat covering my forehead
No one knows this pain of struggle
Under it’s weight I could buckle
Pounding headache all day long
Can hardly handle things that go wrong
For this is the life that I have choose
This is the territory that goes
Of living life under stress
Struggling to make it through each test
To change now, it’s too late
I’m left to deal with this fate
Life’s path has left me dry
Questions the reason for why
Copyright ©
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
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2005-01-11 12:11:38]
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Re: River Of Anxiety
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 12:46:53 PM AEST
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I float down this river alot, a very good expression of how anxiety can affect you,
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Re: River Of Anxiety
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 12:47:35 PM AEST
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| Don't know why no one has commented here. I can almost *feel* the anxiousness within the words. Other than punctuation, I have nothing to add. This was a very good poem. Blessings! |
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Re: River Of Anxiety
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 12:55:39 PM AEST
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Is it ever too late?
If we let Him change us, He will.
Good write.
Stitch |
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Re: River Of Anxiety
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by JockPhillips on
Friday, 25th August 2006 @ 01:15:19 PM AEST
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| Sometimes I write poem songs about river streams with cold water there. I like the strong work. Keep up the good. |
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Re: River Of Anxiety
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by frmpoison2static on
Friday, 25th August 2006 @ 01:46:59 PM AEST
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| wow, this poem hit home...i know these feelings of strong anxiety. |
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