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He isnt coming back
Contributed by
lil_angel
on
Wednesday, 4th December 2002 @ 04:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I remember the very special bond we had
No one could figure it out
We did everything together
Until the day he passed on
And I was to stay here
To this day I still remember the terrible pain
That awful day replays in my mind
My daddy picked me up and told me
I didn’t believe him I couldn’t believe him
The next picture that flashes in my mind is the funeral
I was so scared and so confused
I remember thinking he was playing hide and seek
But I couldn’t find him
The funeral hall had a musty smell to it
My daddy told me he wasn’t coming back
I yelled at him to stop joking
But I had to come to an understanding he isn’t coming back
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2002-12-04 16:00:00]
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Re: He isnt coming back
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by Daniel on
Thursday, 5th December 2002 @ 02:51:50 PM AEST
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| oi pa, some things are better resolved when yur young... it seems to get harder to have closure when yur older with things like death. good write, i enjoyed it. kudos! ;0) -daniel |
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Re: He isnt coming back
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by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 07:39:33 PM AEST
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Beautiful Write!
Jeff |
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Re: He isnt coming back
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by ruby_star_angel on
Friday, 16th May 2003 @ 02:21:49 PM AEST
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| This is a sad poem. It reminds me of when I lost someone close to me when I was young, and this poem made me cry. Still, it's a good poem. |
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Re: He isnt coming back
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by Trisha on
Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 02:33:54 AM AEST
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| i do understand what youre coming from. it doesnt seem far when you start finding the close one they take them away. |
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