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Sorry For Hurting You
Contributed by
pixie
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Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 10:18:21 AM in AEST
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I am so sorry for hurting you,
You’d never do anything to make me blue,
When we fall out it hurts me as much,
Even though I don’t give I to emotions touch.
I hold all my hurt & I try to stop my tears,
As if I cry laid open are all my fears,
I act like I am a statue made of stone,
As I feel most of the time so very alone.
I was once your little angel of love,
I dropped on you from up above,
But now do you feel the same for me?
Please tell me that there’ll always be a WE.
I throw myself at your mercy will you forgive?
Kiss my heart so I can continue to live,
I take your hand please don’t pull it away,
Please tell me you are here to stay.
I know that my tears I don’t always show,
But I am here hurting too I want you to know,
If you hurt, I hurt if you laugh then I laugh,
I don't want our heart to be at the bottom of lifes graph
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pixie
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2005-01-11 10:18:21]
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Re: Sorry For Hurting You
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by afterdark on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 10:18:54 AM AEST
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| You did it yet again..Great poem |
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Re: Sorry For Hurting You
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by skyblumoon on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 10:34:43 AM AEST
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Very powerful poem. I hope all is well with you
Hugs
Blu |
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Re: Sorry For Hurting You
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by Evilcaf on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 10:34:55 AM AEST
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| a poem full of sorrow and pain, i hope things go right for you. great write xx |
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Re: Sorry For Hurting You
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 11:57:33 AM AEST
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| Maybe rephrase that very last phrase somehow... But only because "bath" is a noun, bathe is the verb form. But I understand the difficulty of getting something to rhyme with laugh. Oh I know - maybe "I want A bath?" All the rest is very sad and sweet, Pixie, and I hope it helps Cheers! (and hugs) |
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Re: Sorry For Hurting You
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 12:14:11 PM AEST
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Pixie girl you are so talented with your writes and so much emotions so all so powerful.
great job . hugs |
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Re: Sorry For Hurting You
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by julieh on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 02:38:22 PM AEST
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| another brilliant one pixie...take care ju |
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Re: Sorry For Hurting You
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by mina-1 on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 04:53:29 PM AEST
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well written pixie.
Your poem is full of sadness and pain.
I hope everything goes well for you.
luv,
sue |
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Re: Sorry For Hurting You
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by devine_xox on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 05:03:41 PM AEST
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| Not many poems can bring tears to my eyes but this one did,You are brilliant. Goodluck with things xoxo |
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Re: Sorry For Hurting You
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by 307luvs09 on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 12:53:16 PM AEST
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| And another one. This one was very appropriate for today. Pixie it seems as if we go through the same days. Thanks for helping me cope, your poems are really dope. |
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