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speelin
Contributed by
declinefoale
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Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 10:17:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
sarcasticpoetry
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mii mom sed im ok
speelin isnt dat inportent
just do ur best litl jimy
zeyll lov u n'ee waay
haww rong she wos
i meen hoow rong she waz
wen zer is sutch lignorance
nd pafeticnessesss in ze world
u preetend to car bout stuf
but ur az bad az ze rest
cal ur self a homan
i cal u disposeabel
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2005-01-11 10:17:42]
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Re: speelin
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by TaintedSoul on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 10:56:26 AM AEST
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This is definately an interesting, and intriguing, write. For some reason I can hear someone with a german or russian accent speaking this!
peace
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Re: speelin
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by afterdark on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 12:22:48 PM AEST
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| Everything about this and your poems are a true waste of time at all.. |
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Re: speelin
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 09:13:10 PM AEST
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| ::tries in vain to find something good to say of this poem:: |
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