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Someone Special
Contributed by
Bali
on
Wednesday, 4th December 2002 @ 03:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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In my life i had always been alone
But all my loneliness is now gone
Deep inside my heart's castle
I feel the presence of Somone Special
Someone so near so dear so fine
Whom i always feel is mine
In my dark life my gleaming candle
My everything my Someone Special
Everything now seems to be more bright
Colourful pleasant my every sight
Who has pushed hard on my life's paddle
Who can it be except Someone Special
Like a hope that keeps you alive
Like a brid that brings you smile
A magic you can never cancel
That is why he is so much special
Telling him this i will certainly dare
What others will think i won't care
If needed even with life i will gamble
To tell him that he is my Someone Special
Copyright ©
Bali
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2002-12-04 15:00:00]
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Re: Someone Special
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 4th December 2002 @ 11:59:05 PM AEST
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Yes i say take that gamble...i always say follow your heart even if your love is rejected at least you gave your all...and you know that you did everything you could to make everything possible for things to work....thanks for sharing this one i enjoyed this one i hope he reads this...
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Re: Someone Special
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by Bali on
Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 10:33:02 AM AEST
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thanks a lot for liking my poem "Someone Special" and yes i will take that gamble just waiting for the right time and right place :-)
be in touch and keep assisting me because you know a lot of poetry your poems tell it all
Bye Bye
Bali |
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Re: Someone Special
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by gohar on
Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 01:28:14 PM AEST
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Hello Bali, AsSalam
Your poem is great.
Greetings from Atlanta.
Ashraf Gohar Goreja
www.Goreja.com |
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Re: Someone Special
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by gohar on
Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 01:28:19 PM AEST
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Hello Bali, AsSalam
Your poem is great.
Greetings from Atlanta.
Ashraf Gohar Goreja
www.Goreja.com |
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