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To good to be True
Contributed by
Dragontear27
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Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 10:29:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Everything's to good to be true
from the ground we stand upon
to the sky that has an ever lasting blue
It all just seems like a caun
From the very first kiss we take
until the love dies away and is forsaken
this life of mine seems so fake
because the air is false from the breath I have taken
the people you so generously give your hand out to
aren't always what they seem to be
they'll use up your kindess and turn it back on you
so now do you see what I see
still not convinced alright i'll try again
what about the girl you once knew
the one that flirted with you trying to pretend
she was always in love with you
or how about when you wanted somthing so bad
and it turn out to have some strings attached
or somthing was torn away to soon and made you sad
like the person that which your heart was latched
you see it all turns out the same in the aftermath
everything is to good to be true
happiness is somthing that just doesn't last
but after all that's happened there's nothing you can do
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Dragontear27
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2005-01-10 22:29:31]
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Re: To good to be True
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 10:43:01 PM AEST
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| sometimes thats not true.good write. |
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Re: To good to be True
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by MorbidDeath on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 12:15:59 AM AEST
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| Totally describes how i view life good to know there's someone out tehre as sinical as me but i wont get my hopes up lol great write |
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Re: To good to be True
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by willworkformilk on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 03:09:29 AM AEST
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| Not everything's too good to be true, but many things in are. |
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Re: To good to be True
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 06:12:34 AM AEST
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emotional write, I hope that you find something that makes you happy
pixie xx |
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Re: To good to be True
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by AngelEmmA on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 08:33:58 PM AEST
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hmm... i enjoyed the following stanza...
"still not convinced alright i'll try again
what about the girl you once knew
the one that flirted with you trying to pretend
she was always in love with you"
hmm...just loved it |
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