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Edge
Contributed by
AllSmiles
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Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 09:49:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I feel the flames grasp my feet as I cling to the tiny ridge
My strength grows weaker the longer I hold unto the edge
Cannot remember when I fell
Perhaps I was born clinging to this accursed ledge
My arm shakes because I cannot hold
My strength alone cannot ascend me atop the ledge
So before another night come to a bitter end
A prayer I send unto the heavens
Save me or end me
Copyright ©
AllSmiles
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2005-01-10 21:49:14]
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Re: Edge
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 11:00:14 PM AEST
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| As one who has to fight height phobia, this one gave me shivers. Cheers! |
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Re: Edge
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 12:25:26 AM AEST
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| Great write! I really liked the last line. |
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Re: Edge
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by afterdark on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 08:34:16 PM AEST
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| Very good write..Very intense |
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