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Internal Insanity
Contributed by
Sonibe
on
Wednesday, 4th December 2002 @ 02:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The way I am
inside my heart,
Is nearly enough
to tear me apart.
The thoughts I think
inside of my mind,
Are almost enough
to make me blind.
I'm afraid that my wishes
will cause someone else great pain,
Because they have no idea
that my mind is temporarily insane.
My "off-course" dream
is to make heads roll,
To decapitate someone
would be like taking a soul.
My latest dream was
watching a western town burn to the ground,
About 400 people slayed and bloodless
but not a single head to be found.
If I carry out my thoughts
I'll be a danger to humanity,
My heart has a case
of....Internal Insanity.
Copyright ©
Sonibe
... [
2002-12-04 14:00:00]
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Re: Internal Insanity
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by wyrd_faerie on
Wednesday, 4th December 2002 @ 03:57:27 PM AEST
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| this is really really good...i love the ending...wow...well done... |
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Re: Internal Insanity
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 4th December 2002 @ 11:51:09 PM AEST
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This is so beautiful, my favorite line is If i carry out my thoughts i'll be a danger to humanity, wow...i've actually felt that way before ...thanks for sharing this one it's beautifully written....
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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